Hey. In case you're wondering, that last post was a flash fiction story I wrote a few months back. It's the sixth draft. Sample it and give me some feedback, if you don't mind. I don't care if you think it's bad, just tell me exactly what you didn't like about it. Or, on the other hand, tell me exactly what you did enjoy about it. Also, if you have any questions, feel free to ask and I'll reply.
See you around!
~ Terri Freedom