tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5112356487331068811.post2043452110705468368..comments2023-05-03T07:41:17.970-07:00Comments on Write: Terri Freedomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06942893713791864967noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5112356487331068811.post-3431127991752866602008-12-08T17:49:00.000-08:002008-12-08T17:49:00.000-08:00Come back and write MORE!!!Come back and write MORE!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5112356487331068811.post-36159354726507863692008-11-29T20:51:00.000-08:002008-11-29T20:51:00.000-08:00My only critique is near the end of the story wher...My only critique is near the end of the story where the old man gets shot. It took a minute to figure out it was the old man. Otherwise, the story is great. See comments below.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com